Reviews for The Creature
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
I. Loved. This. It made me laugh at the end. Unexpected ending was a real treat. I loved this short story because it really is short, but discriptive and action-packed. I like also the way you add suspence to this story. Well done.
Savella chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Jethro!
Halan Lore chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
So is that a little rubber toy mouse that just doesn't seem to wear out?

I liked it