Reviews for Tears
hitomi100 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
that is so sad
AspiringWriter05 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Awe...that was so sad yet beautiful. Good job. Awesome short little story. :)
agatha chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
it is good in the 8th line you should put that it is not bed time yet and thats all
Amethyst M. Benson chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Amazing. I liked the emotion and the situation. I've had two grandparents die of cancer and its really hard. This was really encouraging.

Thanks for writing this.

Dessi
royallyinsane1 chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
Wow. Short, sad and to the point. Very nice.

All jesting aside, I thought it was good. Amazing how moving you made it with that amount of words. The ending was great, too.
Needa S chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
This is sad but it is beautifully done as well. Loved the ending. I have a poem similiar to this one. I'll have to post it sometime. Keep up the great work and God Bless.
Halan Lore chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
I don't mind reviewing. Whilst I don't think praying would help in this situation too much. I really appreciate the moral, and the situation.