aww.

John is cute, but isn't he a little pushy?

Ugh, how do you get Wes and Avis back together with out hurting john?

oh well, sorry for my ramblings, you're doing a great job!

Poor John...he should have left it at a friendship. He's just going to get burned, AGAIN. And he's such a smart guy too.

I have been reading along, and just apparently got around to commenting. This is a really fun story, and it's being written so well. I really adore the characters and the chemistry they have. Update soon!

Hey, sorry for the long wait. I have been so very busy lately and I won't have enough time to do this chapter justice. I'm glad that my comments hadn't stopped you from writing, it would be awful if I had. I really liked the they you progressed the characters in this chapter so well done.

I liked Wes's reaction outside the loo

poor John - well at least he got a chance - and hopefully he wont feel a thing in the kiss too, so he'll get it

I went and voted for you. :P I love this story! It's so awesome. I love Wes' and Avis' chemistry! I also love how they know that they're trying to make the other jealous, instead of being all oblivious and whatnot. *thumbs up* I feel sorry for John, though... Please don't make him majorly heartbroken! I'm kinda thinking that that might be inevitable, though... :(

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! :D

Despite a serious case of Writer's Block that caused me to entirely ignore FictionPress, I finally got caught up on your story.

Oh my. So much has happened. Let's see if I can get everything in.

Autumn is such a bitch.

Annalise is such a sweetheart.

Even if John is a hunk, I'm going to remain a Wes fan.

Wes seems absolutely delicious. We need a real life Wes.

Poor Avis. Her commitment issues just breaks my heart.

I hate Parker. She needs to just go away. Let her take John away.

Other than that, FABULOUSLY AMAZING. I'm in love with it. It's the only story that I try and keep up with.

Oh, and if you could possibly drop Autumn and their mother in a ditch and leave them there, that would be great (:

Ah, conflicting emotions. Lovely. They're just so much fun to try to sort out. If you're sadistic. Good chapter - lots of awkwardness. It happens. Especially to me. In real life.

Yup.

I'm a new reader and I have to say that you have got me hooked! This is well written, it's entertaining and I love it! Avis is going to be with John, but yet she feels nothing. Granted she still has feelings for Wes, but she hasn't even remotely gotten over him. I just hope this doesn't blow up in her face-just by me saying that, it's going to happen.

Love it!

stupid wes sucha jerk

aaww poor john

i realy really dont like autumn

glad this finally came out

hope for more soon

-ifly*hugs*

Another very nice chapter! Full of drama, just the way I like it!

I really like the way you always take your time describing how Avis is dressed, it makes imagining the scenes a lot easier.

John is a sweetheart, I feel bad for him he has no idea what he's getting himself into. But since I love Wes a lot more I don't care as much as a should, hehe.

The scene with Wes and Avis was really breathtaking for such a small encounter. I think I told you this before (in regards to their first kiss on the movie set) you have a way with words that creates amazing scenes.

I don't like Autumn, I don't think I ever will. She's just way to annoying. And while right, (about the whole Avis using John scheme) I don't care at all about her.

And I didn't expect John to be that understanding, I really hope you give the guy a nice ending when the story is done, he's way to sweet to be left single and pinning after Avis. (Because we all know Wes and Avis belong together)

I can't wait for the 'Second Stage' of your story! I'm betting there's going to be a lot of jealousy hanging in the air.

Carol

aw... don't hurt John! he sounds like such a sweet guy!

Okay what the hell did she just do? Stupid girl!

Ooh, I love this story! I think it's funny because once I read this chapter, I went to check out your character pics and I pictured Blake Lively for Annaliese (spelling?) as well! Haha. Anyway... I'm really enjoying what you're doing with the characters. I think that Avis should have fought harder with Wes when he told her that those weeks didn't mean anything to him. Considering that he was in love with her, I think it's unrealistic to think that she would believe him. However, I understand that they needed to break up- however, I think you should revise that scene a little.

Other than that, I'm really enjoying this story. Keep up the good work!

aww, this new guy sounds like a total sweet heart! i hope she doesn't use him... i mean, i guess he's kind of a rebound right now, but we'll see.

uh oh... wes with another lady! it'll be interesting to see where this drama goes. also enjoyed the family awkwardness.