hallo there!

thanks for checking my story out the other day.

I'm reading yours now and enjoying it so far :)

so I just wanted to say, keep up the good work~ it's nice and easy to read, your style is simple and flowing. Watch out for mini-grammar blips and comma-insertion, and when you've fixed that I'd say you're already quite a bit better than a lot of the authors on FP!

On to the next chapter~~

i love the chapter

cant wait for more!

hope you update soon!

-ifly*hugs*