I text like that too, except when I have too much to say, then I have to start deleting letters in the middle of words to make things fit.

Anyway, I really like the story. The first few lines of the story were great and made me read... the last bit of the chapter not so much. It sounded too contrived and as if you were rushing it so that you could get to the point (which may actually have been what you were doing). Regardless, I read on and I really like it. It's intriguiging and confusing (like Wes), and I just want to be able to understand everything (much like Avis, but without the family problems).

i loved this story ! it was amazing how you portrayed the characters

but to be completely honest, i would've preferred a different ending

other than that it was awesome :)

I really do text like that so don't feel to bad you're not the only one.

aw! What a cute ending! Thanks for a great read :)

This story was beautiful. I enjoyed reading every minute of it. I love Wes and Avis! )

A beautiful ending to a fantastic story. I've noticed lately that in all the books I read where there's a love story, the characters have stopped seeming distinctive. They've all started to blend together. I felt that you should know that to me, Wes and Avis have always been their own people with actual personalities.

I'm sad the story's done with, but what a story it was.

Congrats on completing it, and good luck in future endeavors!

)

Thanks you... It was the right ending for them... The chemistry between them is amazing... I know they are fictional but still. I wish i had a Wes... Thank you for finishing the story...

Great story kid. I wish you would have given us more in the epilogue though.

That was a really cute ending :) Thanks for writing the epilogue! I love the chemistry and relationship between Wes and Avis. They're definitely meant-to-be.

congrats! i love this storyy!

So sad it's over! Congrats though it turned out great! Can't wait for more :)

It's a weird feeling to know that I've been reading this story for such a long time! Congratulations! You should be proud of yourself for finishing such a novel! I think you held the ending pretty well - some people just finish it really badly, and others just don't finish at all. You did neither and on the contrary, I think your writing skills are at it's highest peak at this chapter.

So well done!

Adorable :)

They are so cutee!

Great job!

lovelovelove it!

im so sad its over

i now have an empty whole in my heart

where this story used to be what ever will i do now?

ok now that im done beomng dramatic

i've been with this story from the begining

and i hope you write a new story

because you have to much talent to just stop writing

cant wait for more by you

much love best wishes and i hope everything goes well for you

-ifly*hugs*

This was such an amazing story, through and through. Wes and Avis make the most gorgeous couple, and you told their story so well. I feel like I should be writing a long, meaningful review at this point, but I don't even know where to start.

They had wonderful chemistry, and I really just felt for their characters. I wanted them to be together, and I feel like the circumstances you presented us with were so believable and so real, that this story COULD happen in real life.

Really, you did a gorgeous job through and through. :)

Priya

(formerly . .)