lmao *giggles* thats great i love this story!:D

hehehehehe cute i finally found out who neil is! lol

yay! he'll learn how to sign language with ewan!:D hehe

lmao i like them together :P they're funny lol

whos neil?

lmao wow Ewan is in interesting character...so is Than for that matter

i like your story so far its quite interesting :)

Great story! I really hope you finish it. It's been almost 2 months since you last updated, but I'm hoping this ends. You really have a talent for writing. You make us, the readers, go through with Than as he learns to let go of Sam and move on. At first I hated him, but now he represents a part of all of us that doesn't want to let go. All your characters are so real, and well-developed. I really really really want to see an ending to this story, so don't let all of us down! :)

"What was the point when dark, destructive creatures like me were alone because they had to be?"

This line makes me so, so sad every time I read it. It evokes such emotion, it makes me cry.

This story is incredible. Your complexity of characters, plot and emotion keeps the reader actively engaged and interested in reading and discovering what comes next. The emotions that Ewan, Neil and Nathan struggle with, you also allow the reader to understand, to sympathize with and to consider seriously. The way that you blend the tenses in the storyline helps to further solidify the "reality" of the characters and how you structure their emotions. The way you move the plot and develop the various plot lines leaves me begging for more! Thank you for posting such a gem of a story; it brightens my day when I've discovered you've added another section. k.

Lovely and touching story. I adore all your characters and the pace is very well set. Keep up the good work.

Seems I made a mistake! You ARE updating this, :) Last updte was this month, haha, I don't know why I didn't notice that. Instead I assumed it was on hiatus.

Anyway, good luck writing the next chapter, hope it's up here soon.

thx for the update. this story is so good!

I am thoroughly enjoying the narrator/protagonist. Like the the tone and his voice. At first I wasn't sure if I would, but I'm glad I kept reading and think his interactions with everyone are hilarious. Plus, I really like it when he explains what was probably going on in addition to what he thought at the time.

It's also interesting to already know, pretty much, how it'll end, but still be intrigued with the journey to that point. Two thumbs up!

this story always hits on a number of levels. It's also the only story I've read where I can feel and believe the grief even while routing for a new relationship to work.

I think I'm liking Neil more as the story goes on. And, well, liking Nathan just a little less as well.

WEll, no, not really. Nathan is so... frustrating that I'm not actively liking him as the moment. But I do like him still.

But Neil is just so, gosh. He's so himself, yeah? He's got, iono, a distinctness that I can't really describe with adjectives.

Well. I'm loving the story, nonetheless. Even if Nathan frustrates me.

Why are you so amazing!

And why is your amazingness always partly finished? I think the only story I read that you've finished is the one with ... Thom. Haha, took me a while to remember his name. i'm not even going to try to remember the story's name.

Anyhow, I would love it if you tried for updated these lovely stories of yours. Mainly, Mise en Place and this, Lifelike. They're so great. And I just want an ending! :(

Please update soon.