Reviews for Lifelike
BlueMoonlily chapter 10 . 7/28/2010
lmao *giggles* thats great i love this story!:D
BlueMoonlily chapter 8 . 7/28/2010
hehehehehe cute i finally found out who neil is! lol
BlueMoonlily chapter 6 . 7/28/2010
yay! he'll learn how to sign language with ewan!:D hehe
BlueMoonlily chapter 5 . 7/28/2010
lmao i like them together :P they're funny lol

whos neil?
BlueMoonlily chapter 2 . 7/27/2010
lmao wow Ewan is in interesting is Than for that matter

i like your story so far its quite interesting :)
Patrick Sentori chapter 23 . 7/22/2010
Great story! I really hope you finish it. It's been almost 2 months since you last updated, but I'm hoping this ends. You really have a talent for writing. You make us, the readers, go through with Than as he learns to let go of Sam and move on. At first I hated him, but now he represents a part of all of us that doesn't want to let go. All your characters are so real, and well-developed. I really really really want to see an ending to this story, so don't let all of us down! :)
Katherine chapter 14 . 7/18/2010
"What was the point when dark, destructive creatures like me were alone because they had to be?"

This line makes me so, so sad every time I read it. It evokes such emotion, it makes me cry.
Katherine chapter 23 . 7/5/2010
This story is incredible. Your complexity of characters, plot and emotion keeps the reader actively engaged and interested in reading and discovering what comes next. The emotions that Ewan, Neil and Nathan struggle with, you also allow the reader to understand, to sympathize with and to consider seriously. The way that you blend the tenses in the storyline helps to further solidify the "reality" of the characters and how you structure their emotions. The way you move the plot and develop the various plot lines leaves me begging for more! Thank you for posting such a gem of a story; it brightens my day when I've discovered you've added another section. k.
lost0984 chapter 23 . 7/5/2010
Lovely and touching story. I adore all your characters and the pace is very well set. Keep up the good work.
Handsome Devil chapter 22 . 6/25/2010
Seems I made a mistake! You ARE updating this, :) Last updte was this month, haha, I don't know why I didn't notice that. Instead I assumed it was on hiatus.

Anyway, good luck writing the next chapter, hope it's up here soon.
D.H. L'Orange chapter 23 . 6/25/2010
thx for the update. this story is so good!
Dark Lynnette chapter 14 . 6/22/2010
I am thoroughly enjoying the narrator/protagonist. Like the the tone and his voice. At first I wasn't sure if I would, but I'm glad I kept reading and think his interactions with everyone are hilarious. Plus, I really like it when he explains what was probably going on in addition to what he thought at the time.

It's also interesting to already know, pretty much, how it'll end, but still be intrigued with the journey to that point. Two thumbs up!
meep chapter 23 . 6/20/2010
this story always hits on a number of levels. It's also the only story I've read where I can feel and believe the grief even while routing for a new relationship to work.
kazoua chapter 23 . 6/19/2010
I think I'm liking Neil more as the story goes on. And, well, liking Nathan just a little less as well.

WEll, no, not really. Nathan is so... frustrating that I'm not actively liking him as the moment. But I do like him still.

But Neil is just so, gosh. He's so himself, yeah? He's got, iono, a distinctness that I can't really describe with adjectives.

Well. I'm loving the story, nonetheless. Even if Nathan frustrates me.
Handsome Devil chapter 23 . 6/17/2010
Why are you so amazing!

And why is your amazingness always partly finished? I think the only story I read that you've finished is the one with ... Thom. Haha, took me a while to remember his name. i'm not even going to try to remember the story's name.

Anyhow, I would love it if you tried for updated these lovely stories of yours. Mainly, Mise en Place and this, Lifelike. They're so great. And I just want an ending! :(

Please update soon.
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