Very dark and humorous. I hope that you don't get too caught up in the idea and conventions of why this is happening to the narrator or get all ethical/spiritual and lose the funny.

Good idea and well executed. I'll keep reading.

-Jake

Cannot wait to read more! Really good, I love the dark humor!

This is well written. The dark humor and overall concept of the piece are greatly appealing. I look forward to seeing where this leads.

Wow, this is incredible! I really love it.. the idea of murdering yourself and living life after new life, remembering them all, is so fresh and open, I've never read anything like it. But it's interesting!

This left me with a lot of questions, and I really hope that you'll continue it. I really love your vocabulary, it colors such detailed pictures in my mind. I'm excited to see what you do with this.

Great job!

Katie

Dark, but somehow almost humorous. I enjoyed it.