Reviews for Wordless Speeches
Lime-Cat chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
I didn't really like the use of ellipses in this poem because I found it unnecessary. I think a period would suffice in these instances of ellipses.

I really like the descriptions you used in this poem, though, because it was really beautiful imagery and it gives me a little bit of a mystifying feeling.

-silv3rdr34ms

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