Please continue writing this is amazing!

please publish the next chapter im loving this book3

Teehee, doesn't the movie look exciting?

ANYWAYS.

O! Can I guess? Can I guess? :]

I think that DAPHNE was actually the one who killed Brooke!

HOW... how... TRAGIC!

Do you SEE what your writing does to me?

My brain HURTS from all of the amazingness that keeps me guessing!

OW!

Your descriptions of the photos were extravagant, but not too overdone-you seemed to find that perfect blend of explanations where the readers have room to create in their mind the images of the characters.

[Might I just add that I am absolutely CSI LV's #1 fan?]

An excellent installment, and I await in feverish anticipation for the next piece of pure brilliance.

My breathing is irregular, thank you very much.

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Whoa, two updates in one day? I am beyond lucky.

I can't wait until this mystery is solved, I seriously NEED to know. I don't like being in the dark so please update! :)

Ugh, another cliff hanger. Please update!

Burt's my uncle. Just sayin'.

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ANYWAYS.

Aww, such dedication! Here, it's only 10:05pm at the moment.

Tee-hee!

ABOUT THE CHAPTER!

I am SO jealous of your writing ability.

Like, honestly.

It flows so smoothly, even though it's jam-packed with your ability to create suspense.

However, I am not fond of cliff-hangers.

I await in eager intensity the ending[s]!

You should post all three and make it, like, a choose your own adventure book.

Lol!

I expect more SOON!

~Kayla

[ps Thanks so much for reading && reviewing the first chapter of Room 475! I hope you enjoy the rest of it, and I look forward to hearing what you think. -]

Wow, I was so sure it was some serial killer/psycho that had jumped on her but sadly, it was only Tyler :P

I'm really enjoying this story and hope you continue!

*mouth drops open in shock*

You COOKED HENRY?

...

-_-

Oh well.

I'm glad to hear you're recovered!

And, you made it up by giving me this delightful chapter that I had been so eagerly awaiting.

;D

And now, I am left with nothing more to sink my teeth into.

I hope that other half of the chapter is completed quickly!

I absolutely loved it, and the nearly delirious personality of Daphne is extremely well written and seems like it could happen in real life.

I missed yalls!

[:

YEAH! Awesome :P I Just Love This Story

I Await For An Update XD

Sincerly, AnimeFanx101

Le -GASP-!

;]

That was... profound.

As usual.

And, *sighs*, I totally understand the painful sophomore state of being.

I mean, it's not like we're freshmen anymore [thankheavens?] But we're not juniors, who get to be seniors next, and we're not seniors, getting ready to graduate. We're just kind of... there. Lol.

_-

Anyways, I'm very proud of all yalls.

(

I hope that you continue the updating and its regularity!

I NEED to see what's next.

Or, I might.. um.. I might.. never finish OTB?

Lol.

I'm not sure if that's threatening...

but, its about the extent of my power.

;]

Have a LOVERLY day!

XD Awesome Story XD I Can Not Wait For Ch 10

Its Good, I Hope You Update Soon

Sincerly, AnimeFanX101

"I'd rather shove scissors into my eyes while listening to long fingernails scratch out the length of a blackboard and eating my own arm."

That was SO SO SO funny! _ I burst out laughing.

;]

So, I'm very excited to see that you're back!

Even though it took you a pretty darn long time.

Even though I know I'm not one to talk, as previously mentioned.

(

So, this new installment is absolutely amazing.

As usual.

I just hope they keep coming, and if they don't, I'm going to put on my angry eyes and PM you again.

Hehehe.

HOW ARE YOU?

And did you guys have the opportunity to check out my new updates on Only The Benefits?

I'd love to know what you thought.

So glad to see that you weren't taken captive by cannibilistic carnival clowns.

I like C's.

C

Hope to read more soon!

I'd love to hear from yalls!

;]

!

~Kayla

[peacelove&&musikk]

:(

This was in OCTOBER.

OCTOBER!

Hahaha.

O, how much I loved this story...

and do you know how long.. how many torturous MONTHS you've left me hanging?

MONTHS, I TELL YOU! Soon to be YEARS.

O

[O, who am I kidding? It's not like I'm one to talk. .

So, i'm pretty interested in what's going to happen next. I like the action and plotline so far. The only constructive criticism i can offer is that you should try writing in a more coherent manner. There are a lot of run-on sentences and disjointed thoughts. Sometimes, it really helps with the emotion. Other times, it's just distracting. So try leveling that out.

Overall, nice job :)

Evil: my only description for you! How dare you tease me? My tiny mind cannot wrap around this! How will it all work out? Akk! Lol. Thanks for the quick update! Loved it-and truly it was genius of her to act like she had been attacked. Sure, the whole file-on-the-desk scenario was a tad far fetched, but what fun would a normal story be? Not much, I dare say! :D I'm eagerly waiting for the next installment! :D:D:D:D