|Reviews for JailBait|
| Redache chapter 9 . 11/21/2017
FUCKING HELL! Okay, okay, calm down... Grrrrr... I was totally in love with this story, and then it just stopped and now I want more but it hasn't updated since 2011 and, and, and... I'm left with a cliffhanger and so many questions and I really love Linne, and I just want MORE of your amazing writing...
| perfect.fluke chapter 9 . 11/16/2017
aw man. how did i stumble upon this. i don't suppose you plan on finishing this at all? its so good... for once its not a typical mary sue character.
i hope one day you continue...
| Kay Avanti chapter 9 . 2/4/2014
YOU GO GIRL!
| Alex chapter 9 . 12/12/2013
Coolest story ever! Sure, unorthodox, but please keep writing. PLEASE UPDATE!
| Scruffy chapter 9 . 11/13/2013
Hi, I thought your japanese was a little weird... You don't seem to be a native speaker and neither am I (I only learn Japanese), so I can't really be sure but in the whole story the forms were weird (like when she was speaking Japanese to the Yondaime and it should have been in a more polite form but it was like normal speech)... and I'm quite sure Kyoudai means sibling, which in the Yakuza, is how each member refers to the other equal ranking members - 'brothers'. It's the completely wrong word to refer to Stone with... [experience from reading too many yakuza mangas.]
On another note, I saw the title of your other story... if you wanted it to mean The Dragon's Beloved, then it should have been 'Ryu no Koibito', cause now it means The Lover's Dragon...
| madz chapter 9 . 10/5/2013
UPDATE pleasee, love it :)
| bookwurm247 chapter 9 . 9/27/2013
what is denise doing here!?
| clichelover chapter 9 . 9/21/2013
Amazing story please update
| cyanistique chapter 9 . 6/22/2013
This story is so interesting. I love the way you've created the characters.. they all have flaws and it makes them so real. Stone and Trigs are growing on me LOL I hope you'll continue this story.
| guest chapter 5 . 3/9/2013
I don't like linne. She's a compete bitch o Stone & always so desrespectful to him. Like honestly she should show him gratitude & not be so resentful towards him. She needs to stop hating life and see what Stone has done for her, i mean if he wanted to kill her he could ha but he obviously cares for her & she doesn't see that. I just don't like her personality at all.
| EireGal chapter 9 . 2/17/2013
Really enjoyed this story, its different from alot of stuff on FP. I hope that as u updated your profile page recently u may get round to updating this story. Would love to read ch 10.
| shann-ng chapter 9 . 1/25/2013
argh i cant decide if i love her or hate her shes sooo fustrating haha! i actually feel bad for stone! please update soon :)
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/17/2013
ER. MUAH. GOD! I want to know what happened! Needs an update ASAP.
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/11/2013
So good! Update soon :)
| amourpatinage chapter 9 . 12/29/2012
this is such a great story! please continue with it!