Reviews for He's Goodbye
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
i like the word choice you've used here: "turquoise dreams", "dark regret", "star-white camera flashes" and so on. it really makes the poem. well done, good work.
Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Beautifully written; I like your style already.

To me this is a bittersweet poem, though the ending stanza is a little saddening.

All in all, I love your use of imagery.