Reviews for To Sleep In Vain
CharismaticOutCry chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
My gosh.

I really did love this one.

I like the flow and the rhyming.
LyricsArePoetry chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
This is amazing! I love the use of 'to' at the beginning of most lines, that was effective!
4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
I like how descriptive this is. Took me a while to find the beat/rhythm and rhyme of it, but still good! Keep writing!
AspiringWriter05 chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Interesting, i like it. For the most part the rhymes were good. Keep up the great writing. :)