Reviews for Damn Shame
chartonjeremiah chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
As you know, or should have realised, I love your prose, too. I guess that you are worried about this piece because it is quite risky but read it back to yourself. You pulled it off. Nice one.
xGekkeiju chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
Hey Holli. (:

There's no judgment here, my dear. Especially not when mutant jalapeno peppers could become involved at the drop of a flame. ;

I love the emotion in this. LOVE it. It's so bitter and disgusted, and yet coldly detached. Such an interesting tone to take on! It made me shiver. It's great. I loved it. So real, so RAW. Your work is always good for that.

I love the comparisons, and despite what you put I liked the ending. It really wrapped things up nicely.

I have no qualms with anything here. Everything just worked. 8D

Great job on this, and keep it up! I want to see more of your prose!