Reviews for Prayer Garden
Maryn of Salix chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
A very good and encouraging piece, I liked the ending a lot. :) You did a good job! My only suggestion is to vary sentence structure a bit (I get this a lot too.) There were a lot of sentences beginning with "Sitting down... Hearing a sound..." - that kind of thing. :) Anyways, keep writing! Its nice to find stories like this with a wholesome, God-glorifying message. :)