|Reviews for Pride|
| Alexis Grey chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
"Once a child develops a sense of pride, that is the start of their loss of innocence." So, the beginning of pride carries with it the loss of innocence, in other words. How wonderfully insightful!
Overall, amazing. It feels like I say that in a lot of my reviews, but this piece really ups the ante.
I eagerly anticipate reading more of your work.