|Reviews for Tsubasa Henshi: Vaireto's Story|
| Angelica.Eddings chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
Hm... You were right when you said that anime lovers would like the story. It's like a mix between an anime and a fairy tale. Very interesting. There were a few grammar mistakes and typos throughout the story, so you should go over them. Other than that, this is pretty good considering that you're 13.