Reviews for tomorrow
Fragile Things chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
i really loved this one. i thought the summary was intriguing and the first verse really pulled me in. the concept of this piece is beautiful i think and i love the way you played it. awesome job.
ZombieMcQueen chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
I think this is one of my favorites of yours.

this is why I love your poetry...it evokes so much real emotion while still maintaining style. excellent.
andylikesthesmellofspring chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
cute. very.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
I like the rhymes and the cadence of this poem. Great job.

Favourite line:

"And we have to find words for what we have to say."

-lovely.
The Hippie Nerd chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
I love the paradoxes, uncertainties, and opposites of this piece... "And we have to find words for what we have to say," "I failed at not loving you, / And then you took my love away," "There isn't even a today," and such. There's depth and beauty to it, poetic and confusing yet meaningful and sad at the same time. I really like the line "Riding on goodbye," so short yet says so much. Great job!