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Kalista Jia chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
It is lovely.

screams go unheard through the madness

muffled in insanity and apologies

I dont know how to explain... but dont worry, it is something good. Hm... I like atmosphere... (Can we say that?)

Good poem. _ *Hi-5*
Icrome chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
last verse is my favorite, "muffled in insanity and apologies", great line, enjoyed it