Reviews for Untitled
TwistedLullabies chapter 2 . 10/14/2010
I enjoyed. Well not enjoyed really, since its sad and stuff, but... you know. Yeah.

I am horrible at writing reviews. I try anyways...

basically: its a good story so far
TwistedLullabies chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Good description of detail and stuff.

I like it so far. Off to Chapter Two!
Lana Sky chapter 2 . 8/2/2008
Wow, this story really interests me. I find myself wanting to know what happens! I just wish *evil glare* that it weren't so darn short.

Lana Sky chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
Very, very interesting. Though, it does remind me of the begining of "Poison Study." I really want to know what happens next so thats good, one thing though, we don't really know that much about the main character (like wether its a boy or girl) though I'm sure your explain more in further chapters. All in all and job well done. Update soon.


gold against the soul chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
An exciting beginning. The one comment I would make is that you sometimes confuse past and present tense - easy to do when you're very involved with the story.