|Reviews for But|
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
Wow. That was an amazing poem, an amazing story. Practically epic. The story, the questions, the facts that are faced and those that are not. I don't know if I could say there was a part I particularly liked, because I really liked it all. Perhaps:
"Got back in my car and headed towards the beach.
Prayed to God and screamed out loud.
But my words were lost in the city’s sound.
My head has been shaved and I called my Mom.
I asked a million questions and told her all my stories.
But I mainly asked where the hell did I go wrong?"
You always have to go somewhere eventually. Great job, this was quite amazing.