Reviews for Watching
When Twilight Fades chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
The only mistake I could find grammar or otherwise, was "The TV is crying, so I do to."
Queen Kat Food chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
Intense. Pretty well done, just ambiguous enough to leave me wondering what really is going on. He's dead...I think but I guess you could be the one who is dead, stuck in the television, but it makes more sense if it were him...anyway good job *claps*.

Noted one typo..."The TV is crying, so I do to" should be too.