Reviews for First Kiss
DarkStar616 chapter 12 . 3/6/2012
Andene chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Hey! You're the first Canadian author I've read on this site! Yay a fellow Canuck! Anyway, great start to your story. I can't wait to read the rest.
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 5 . 10/2/2008
the story doesnt make any sence why is he mad at her and why does everyone hate her?
VampiressAJ chapter 12 . 10/1/2008
omg i love it. i laughed so hard during some parts of this.
WritingxIsxLife chapter 12 . 10/1/2008
loved it...but its getting a little confusing!
FFWG chapter 12 . 10/1/2008
a little confusing (i.e. Mike sighing on the same line that Jake is talking.)

But I liked it.
calmthestorm chapter 11 . 9/15/2008
OMG! Your story is so good! I cant wait for the next part!
theRaven'sDesk chapter 11 . 9/14/2008
that's the best chapter yet! Your writing has really improved.
WritingxIsxLife chapter 11 . 9/14/2008
aw, how sweet, Jake blushing! Haha, that actually happened to me and my friend once. :)
blurrylights chapter 10 . 8/31/2008
Why is Olivia staying at a hotel, instead of Lizzie's house? And you called Jake with the name Jared a few times, so that was confusing. Update soon! :)
WritingxIsxLife chapter 10 . 8/31/2008
oh...a little bonding moment there... :P but then he had to go and ruin it by bring up brandon...stupid stupid jake. :)
FFWG chapter 9 . 8/22/2008
update soon, PLEASE!

This story is AMAZING!
FFWG chapter 6 . 8/22/2008

that is, like, physical abuse.
FFWG chapter 3 . 8/22/2008
I like this chapter. A LOT!
WritingxIsxLife chapter 9 . 8/22/2008
love it, update soon, that was funny. "conceited much?" which is totally something i would say! :P
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