| Reviews for First Kiss |
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   DarkStar616 chapter 12 . 3/6/2012 Update! |
| Andene chapter 1 . 11/3/2009 Hey! You're the first Canadian author I've read on this site! Yay a fellow Canuck! Anyway, great start to your story. I can't wait to read the rest. |
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 5 . 10/2/2008 the story doesnt make any sence why is he mad at her and why does everyone hate her? |
| VampiressAJ chapter 12 . 10/1/2008 omg i love it. i laughed so hard during some parts of this. |
| WritingxIsxLife chapter 12 . 10/1/2008 loved it...but its getting a little confusing! |
| FFWG chapter 12 . 10/1/2008 a little confusing (i.e. Mike sighing on the same line that Jake is talking.) But I liked it. |
| calmthestorm chapter 11 . 9/15/2008 OMG! Your story is so good! I cant wait for the next part! |
| theRaven'sDesk chapter 11 . 9/14/2008 that's the best chapter yet! Your writing has really improved. |
| WritingxIsxLife chapter 11 . 9/14/2008 aw, how sweet, Jake blushing! Haha, that actually happened to me and my friend once. :) |
| blurrylights chapter 10 . 8/31/2008 Why is Olivia staying at a hotel, instead of Lizzie's house? And you called Jake with the name Jared a few times, so that was confusing. Update soon! :) |
| WritingxIsxLife chapter 10 . 8/31/2008 oh...a little bonding moment there... :P but then he had to go and ruin it by bring up brandon...stupid stupid jake. :) |
| FFWG chapter 9 . 8/22/2008 update soon, PLEASE! This story is AMAZING! |
| FFWG chapter 6 . 8/22/2008 I HATE BRANDON! that is, like, physical abuse. |
| FFWG chapter 3 . 8/22/2008 I like this chapter. A LOT! |
| WritingxIsxLife chapter 9 . 8/22/2008 love it, update soon, that was funny. "conceited much?" which is totally something i would say! :P |