Yet again your writing is intriguing and phenomenal. Bitch please, write faster. Can you tell that I want to read the end? Said too soon maybe but I'm curious.

AH, another story loved(:

This is really good.

You know what would make a good twist?

Since Jace (or Jason) is smart enough to shred what he does, but KJ isn't though...are you getting it?

KJ should have her own list too and like forget to dispose of it while she's at Jace's house and Mari will come over the same day and discover it!(:

She wouldn't confront him though, she'd fake her way through it and play his little game and she would PLAY HIM;D

hahaha, wonderful story so far though.

I'm sorry but I really hate Jace right now,lol. I don't care how much Mari likes him but it takes a lot to convince me especially since he's been lying to her out of his ass, haha.

This is a really good story so I hope you keep writing it and update soon because I want to know what's going to happen.

I realized that I have probably never reviewed this story, which would've been a damn shame because I love it; all the characters, everything. You do have typos but that's the better sort of error. The easily fixable kind. (As opposed to having no plot or no personality.)

I am a bit confused on a couple of points. For example, everyone thinks Jace is so dumb he has a tutor and can't count to 50. But then earlier you said that the guys and Kaylah Jay had seen his room and stuff. Jace's facade doesn't seem realistic because of just little inconsistencies like that.

I absolutely LOVE this story, i feel sorry for poor Mari getting played by Jace because of what her father did.

Please update soon, would love to find out what happens next!

Aww...now i want to cry. Damn Jace :(

Love the story though!

xx

Ali

this is an absolutely amazing read. i love the storyline, the characters and the emotions. seriously intense, dude.

omg! OMG he's in her house! sh!t, whats gonna happen!

cant wait to read more.

This is good!

Keep going!

I love it!

More!

This is good!

Keep going!

I love it!

More!

Okay... So I wrote a review and typed a lot and then this whore of a phone deleted it all-.- soo here goes once again but shorter. It was intense . I loved the outlook we got on Quinn and now we know why they were so nasty to each other. Apprx. How many chapters is this because I'd like to know when stuff will be revealed! And I wonder how Jace will react to her dad who he believes to be the murderer or his mother if that is even an accurate accusation. So...please update soon because you can't keep leaving us hanging

ah no!

why did you end it here hahaha!

i need to know what happens next!

update soon, i'm so anxious!

great work!

I love it!

Keep going!

its great!

more!

Oh wow.

I'm really shocked.

Wow.

Seriously. Well I gotta say i appreciated the legibility of this chapter _

Gosh, like i feel like... well there's still parts that im trying to wrap my mind around.

I still have an affinity for JAce, even though what he wants to do is so immoral in my book anyway.. like you know, how can you hold a daughter accountable for her father's actions.

I also wonder still about M's panic attacks... also i still haven't forgotten the seeing in colour.. and seeing in black and white issue.

i also wonder at M's cluelessness.. and whether that's sincere.. you know just considering the title of the story and all .

But yeah that's it really. It's been a pleasure reading this story ]

would love to read the next chapter very very soon (hint) lol ]

take care

bye

Oh, its just beautiful... ..

im just gonna go ahead and read the next one okay D