it good for a filler chapter it needs more excitment

well done great quicker if you can did come over more likeable,loveable in this chapter

I think it's working. If anyone is questioning the legitimacy of their relationship, I think the blame lies in Karen's inability to open up or trust; not in Ben's character. Keep up the good work.

-Jez

OMG! I love it so far, BUT, I think the story would be better if you lay off the romance a little bit and focus a little more on the story. Sometimes you skip scenes that I want to read about, and include scenes that are just repeating over and over. No I am not bothered by the lemon, but I think, maybe without realizing it, you made Ben seem kinda player-ish and just out for her body. Obviously, I'm sure this wasn't your intention, but you haven't given him much depth as a person, or as a character. However, I think the detail you give to the actual cars racing is phenomenal. I LOVE THIS STORY!

Hope this was somewhat helpful.

~HiPpOoFdOoM~

love it...!

love it i cant wait for next chapter

I'm definitely in love with this story. Keep up the awesomeness!

I really like the chapter. Their wasn't as much action as i imagine but i can understand your reason. But don't worry the story is still very gd

xox-ren-xox

Hi. Good chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. The last chapter was good, too by the way.

hey, i'm excited that she's finally in the whole upper ring of the street racers. it's exciting. :P

my condolences for your death. :(

Really good chapter! Continue soon.

this is one my favourite stories soon ca't wait to see what happens

What is going to happen at nine o'clock?...such suspense.

Looking forward to your next update! How many chapters are you planning?

p.s. Was the 'Paul Walker' just a coincidence, or are you playing on 'Fast and the Furious'?

I love this story : ) ben and her are so cute

great chapter! i really liked it