Reviews for Lost Wings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very beautiful, sad but kind of happy at the same time . Surprisingly enough, not depressing! I love the descriptions and the Doctor's thoughts, though I'm still a little confused about the pills... did the nurse accidentally mix them up? Cheers, Akasha |
![]() ![]() AH My goodness I am crying! Having actually *vacationed* briefly in the loony bin, this story hit really close to home. This was so, so, so pretty. I loved your imagery, I really saw angels. And you were right about the nurses, and about the doctors searching for "file fodder." Great phrase, great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was pretty interesting. A little short for you, but still amazing as usual. ] I'm alittle confused though, did Michael die at the end? -Kiri |
![]() ![]() ![]() Does he die? Is he really crazy? My liking for your writing is growing. -smiles- |
![]() ![]() Very cute, but i can't say that i didn't expect the ending because i've had similar ideas but never got to write them down. A touching story but a bit stiff in the beginning, the second half is wonderfully written and i like that it's actually up to the reader to interpret if Michael actually was an angel or not, and if he died. What buggs me a bit is the fact that the pill he took was said to be different... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the ending. It's simultaneously open-ended and very fulfilling. The narration was good, especially the execution of present-tense-third-person. I find that tone always feels particularly surrealist to me. You have great talent. I'm so jealous. |
![]() ![]() you're one fascinating person, cat. I like it, run with it. or fly with it. or jump off the roof with it, however it goes down. and without meaning to offend, I was under the impression that you were a morbid psychopath who possibly escaped from the psyche ward... or something like that. none the less, I'm glad you didn't jump off the roof. and I mean that as the sincerest form of compliment - the bladesmith |
![]() ![]() ![]() The intro was pretty morbid. But the overall piece left quite an impression. I especially loved the way you described the transformation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How adorable one-shot with melancholy overtones. This kind of piece isn't naturally found in original fiction; I like that. What a grotesque end to childish innocence, though. I would rather have it that he had not died. Michael certainly is a cute character, seemingly unaware of the world around him, but is more aware of a different universe unknown to society's eyes. It is cute how he thinks he is an angel and his mother was as well, though it makes me a bit sad, knowing the cruel truth. And no, I don't think this story is the product of a demented person suffering from psychosis. It's actually quite creative. If only oblivious little Micheal did not meet his death at the end of the chapter, I would have liked everything about this piece. Happy Writing. |