|Reviews for The Other Woman|
| Fight With Doves chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
I like the way this story ends and how simple it is.
It's really good. )
(It's says "Matt" in the 13th paragraph by the way)
| Abc1234512 chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
Ooh, I liked it. It was very interesting, and not at all like the many other one shots I've read.
I saw 'Matt' once at, "I'd never heard the name Jessica when it came to Matt", but that was it.
| Izzy chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
This was nice. It seemed a little disjointed in parts but only for a few moments and then it was back to normal. I think you need to improve how you describe Sarah's actions, they didn't always convey a clear picture.
But I like how you used 'Somber' as Max's last name.
| Stopdamadness chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
Wow...this is great. And is this really based on a true story?