Reviews for King of Hearts, Queen of Spades |
---|
![]() ![]() That's an awesome story you've got there! |
![]() ![]() ![]() write more please |
![]() ![]() ![]() So do we ever find out more about this cruel and mysterious King of Hearts? Does 'Alice' fall down the hole? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just saying but you seriously need to update this story. Love the first chapter!~ I'm already a member of the comm, so feel free to update there as well. *wink* |
![]() ![]() ![]() It may just be me, but i do believe this story is in need of a chapter update? yes? awesome, maybe...it could be like a christmas present or something, you know...i'd definitely accept it. :) please update that'd be stellar I've read this story before to, when it had about 5 chapters in, and i'd like to see how you are going to change it and finish it out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's s a really well done Chapter one , wow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well this is definately an interesting story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, im hooked this is great! I cant wait to find out more about the King and his world! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter is really bautiful. I love the imagery an the use of sounds. It's eloquent the way you wrote this chapter. Keep at it! Nat |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read it, loved it, reviewed it. I like this story, update soon please? I believe it is rather amusing, will she get to Wonderland in time? P |
![]() ![]() ![]() freaky can't wait for the next chaps! |
![]() ![]() ![]() man that guys creepy |
![]() ![]() ![]() the suspense is killing me already |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good beginning, draws reader right into the story and makes them as curious as Alondra. Neat name by the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is pure brilliance. |