Reviews for Twilight
henbee chapter 17 . 3/17/2009
LOL, I love the last line.

"There's no such thing as ghosts, dear."

Haha, Mason got all offended. Aww, don't worry Mason, we believe in vampires!

Update soon, I love it.

Lol. Damsel in distress. Lucien and Eric! :p
ishani acuinatum.ashley chapter 17 . 3/15/2009
cool...that part ws simply hilarious when lucien ws found having you really know how to build up a surprise...good work...will be waiting for your next chapter
cajun-cuteness chapter 16 . 3/13/2009
LOL. We can't just get an apartment. It has to be haunted.



But don't kill off Lucien! I LIKE HIM!

Even though he's gay. And I'm a girl. I still think he sounds so SWEET!
cajun-cuteness chapter 15 . 3/13/2009
I can't decide if I'm happy or kinda disappointed...


They would have made such a cute couple!


But Mason and Belle are adorable too!

chococcino chapter 16 . 3/6/2009
_ The apartment gave me goosebumps

...Wow, can't wait for the next chappie!

I wonder who or what is doing those things

T-T.. I feel sorry for Lucien and his china ornaments..
ishani acuinatum.ashley chapter 16 . 3/6/2009
awesomw chapter...but don't you think it's a little too short?...well anyway i enjoyed keep updating :D
Somedaymydreamswillcome chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
I really like that the whole band has a different species. hahahah :)

Although I gotta admit Gary sounds better than Mason to me. :P :)
ishani acuinatum.ashley chapter 15 . 2/27/2009 update it soon...can't wait to read more
henbee chapter 15 . 2/27/2009

Whooa headrush.

Gary loves Belle, who loves Mason, but Mason now may love Belle but thinks she doesn't like him whilst Mimi loves Gary and Lucien obsesses over gender issues.

This needs an update.

Like, now.

Waverley so has to read this.
QueensofChaos chapter 2 . 2/27/2009
This story is interesting, but there are a few things that bug me about it.

Have you read "Twilight" by Stephanie Meyer?

If you have, are you trying to get yourself sued?

Yes, the plot is original and creative, so I'll give you that, but come on.

Main character's name is Belle (ripoff of Bella much?)

The guy, Mason, is increadibly gorgeous and just happens to be a vampire (Does the name Edward Cullen ring a bell?)

And don't even get me started on the title.

I'm not saying this to offend, merely stating facts.
chococcino chapter 15 . 2/26/2009
NO! It just HAD to end like that T_T I want to read more!


Great ending. HAHA, poor Belle. Poor Gary too.

Mason's creepy when he's angry!

Anyway keep up the awesome writing!

BitchMcGee chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
shouldn't this be on fanfiction?
ishani acuinatum.ashley chapter 13 . 2/20/2009
awesome ...i m waiting for more...

good luck
Naomi Chick chapter 13 . 1/24/2009
I love this chapter. I'm glad Bella is safe. Wow! Bella and Davina had a good conversation. Gilbert, seriously need some help.
chococcino chapter 13 . 1/23/2009
Woohoo! Belle's safe!

but I wonder what Gilbert's gonna do for Plan B?

and whoa, Davina likes ...? SERIOUSLY?
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