Reviews for pretending is just a cruel pleasantry
From The Stone Bridge chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
I like how you use so many adjectives, the imagery is repulsive yet attractive at the same time. This goes in my faves.

oh, and the a/n at the bottom with the quote from "it" was a good touch

ps - I like your new pen name ]
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
I liked this, and I like your pen name change. Keep it up and update with some more pieces soon :)

chemarim chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
I like it. I'm not crazy about it, though it's well written, but I definitely like it. Did you mean shrewed or shrewd? I'm assuming you meant shrewd, but shrewed: (verb) to be a shrew or do a shrew-like action in the past. That word makes me giggle, and I may have to use it in the near future. )