Reviews for Little Less Obvious
MysteryGirl450 chapter 2 . 12/28/2015
This is written beautifully
Guest chapter 36 . 10/8/2015
This was so original but thanx a lot cause now lm in love with is the best book lve ever read
Guest chapter 33 . 9/19/2015
gahhhh give me a chance keri pleaaaaase i was all originally punch alex's lights out but GIVE HIM A CHANCE!
Guest chapter 36 . 3/27/2015
This is the single most amazing story I've ever read - off line or not. I fell in love with all the characters, the plot was flawless, it made me laugh and cry and I can't think of anything you could have done to make it better. It really is special.:) This should seriously be a book. I don't know if you're still on here, or even if you'll see this message, but this deserves to be published! It's fucking great! I loved BB part especially. The entire thing was so cute and funny I'll definitely be reading it again and again. I really hope you keep writing, if not now then someday 'cause this was absolutely perfect. And the fact you finished in a few months is absolutely crazy! Wow, I want to thank you so much for that amazing read, and I wish you the best. :)
crazydaisyyy chapter 36 . 2/13/2015
This was SUCH AN AMAZING STORY! i loved the character developments and the plot and keri and alex are the cutest! :-)
lilcarellijohn chapter 36 . 1/30/2015
TWO WORDS:Loved it
lilcarellijohn chapter 26 . 1/27/2015
Oh snap just when everything was going right
justin.saithong chapter 1 . 1/27/2015
One of the best stories I've ever read. Wondering why they haven't made it into a book...
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Wow getting more popular i see even after so many years later, good or great. I love this Story so much that i am gonna read this again and again like crazy till i am satisfied so you people out there got the drill right that this story is very well written,and great storyline and has good humour it :) :)
MileyRowling chapter 36 . 9/24/2014
Wonderful story!
kwirk chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
k wait.

you finished this in a few months?



this is so fab. i can't.
ajashire1 chapter 36 . 8/12/2014
Awwww! Not gonna lie I'm pretty freaking happy right now. That was a wonderful ending and I kinda figured out what he was going to do once they got to the concert. Nonetheless, it was a great story and the title fits it perfectly. ;3
rusty-reader998 chapter 26 . 6/16/2014
ok so there's something here that confuses me..that if Alex's family had broken all contact with Tracy's family than how did he know without even picking up the phone that Tracy was the one calling? otherwise u r one hell of an author and this story is just love _
holyst chapter 7 . 6/7/2014
thats all i can say
this is awsome
atn chapter 5 . 2/22/2014
This is seriously sexual harassment. It's not even funny anymore.
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