Reviews for the spin
for shame chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
"i don't want you fossilized in my bloodstream."

"newly-emaciated cheekbones..."


this is definitely not crap.
x account closed x chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
cassi it's brit &&i fucking miss you

yr still in my heart, chicka. hope everything's good.
give me november chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
i cannot keep up, it's so fast-paced!
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Amazing word choice and great imagery.

"i realize i fake loving." -great line.

This piece is good, don't doubt your work :)
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
wow. that was so poignant and beautiful.

i love it.

i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would really mean a lot.
Lady Fingers chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
"i don't want you fossilized

in my bloodstream."

possibly the most beautiful line i have read/connected with in months
riotmaker chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
you give me chills.

this is gorgeous: "i realize i fake loving."

C.J. Mahan chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Wonderfully written - heartfelt and moving. You've taken a topic that's been done over and done over again, and given it fresh life.
Process-Of-Dying chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Very very well written, I loved every word of it
gg. lass chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
no worries.

this is not crap.

my favorite stanzas are the first and last.

great wording.

yours until the wind changes,

Some Stranger chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Yeah. I know how that goes. Memories play like a goddamn broken record. Or 8-track or something.

It's not crap.