"i don't want you fossilized in my bloodstream."

"newly-emaciated cheekbones..."

beautiful.

this is definitely not crap.

cassi it's brit &&i fucking miss you

yr still in my heart, chicka. hope everything's good.

i cannot keep up, it's so fast-paced!

Amazing word choice and great imagery.

"i realize i fake loving." -great line.

This piece is good, don't doubt your work :)

wow. that was so poignant and beautiful.

i love it.

i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would really mean a lot.

"i don't want you fossilized

in my bloodstream."

possibly the most beautiful line i have read/connected with in months

you give me chills.

this is gorgeous: "i realize i fake loving."

incredible.

Wonderfully written - heartfelt and moving. You've taken a topic that's been done over and done over again, and given it fresh life.

Very very well written, I loved every word of it

no worries.

this is not crap.

my favorite stanzas are the first and last.

great wording.

yours until the wind changes,

gg

Yeah. I know how that goes. Memories play like a goddamn broken record. Or 8-track or something.

It's not crap.