|Reviews for the spin|
| for shame chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
"i don't want you fossilized in my bloodstream."
this is definitely not crap.
| x account closed x chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
cassi it's brit &&i fucking miss you
yr still in my heart, chicka. hope everything's good.
| give me november chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
i cannot keep up, it's so fast-paced!
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Amazing word choice and great imagery.
"i realize i fake loving." -great line.
This piece is good, don't doubt your work :)
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
wow. that was so poignant and beautiful.
i love it.
i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would really mean a lot.
| Lady Fingers chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
"i don't want you fossilized
in my bloodstream."
possibly the most beautiful line i have read/connected with in months
| riotmaker chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
you give me chills.
this is gorgeous: "i realize i fake loving."
| C.J. Mahan chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Wonderfully written - heartfelt and moving. You've taken a topic that's been done over and done over again, and given it fresh life.
| Process-Of-Dying chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Very very well written, I loved every word of it
| gg. lass chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
this is not crap.
my favorite stanzas are the first and last.
yours until the wind changes,
| Some Stranger chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Yeah. I know how that goes. Memories play like a goddamn broken record. Or 8-track or something.
It's not crap.