Reviews for Organized Chaos
Whatsit chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
I laughed SO hard.
notyourbiz chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
oh that was so funny!
Caecilia chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
hehehe, I love Melanie's response to Jenna reading the letter- “That’s contradictory, by the way.” Melanie interjected.- Love it. *laughs*

Oh! All the paper that's being wasted and trees we've lost! Priceless. I love Melanie. She's so funny!

I think it's a bit unrealistic of a story, but I don't think you were really trying for something that's that likely to happen.

Interesting story for sure. Made me have a good laugh.

~~Beer Run August, at the Roadhouse [Link in profile]

Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Cute story. It made me laugh and smile. Nice work. Keep writing!

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day.

~Twilight Starr~
xLittleBlackConverse chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Haha ok. This was funny. It was like a kind of spoof of cliches or something. I dont know if that was your intention when you wrote this but it seemed like that to me. Anyway the buttcheeks thing? Hilarious )
R.T.D.W chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
Heh. Heheheh. Hehehahehehahaheh.

I loved this, dunno why, though, but it was sweet... Good work, man.

A Beautiful Oblivion chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
That was really funny! I can't believe he got the wrong locker for so long. And talk about a rebound girl! But I really can't see the hydrangea thing... it's kind of scary. Very nice story though!

~A Beautiful Oblivion'