Reviews for Pretty Boy
JiMbO XXI chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
iv read a littel of your pomes and stuff it sounds like your always waiting go out and tell him! dude
MagicWords chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
"Your beautiful"-"You're beautiful"

"The loved you first"-"TheY loved you first"

just a few mistakes that stopped me in my tracks while reading. another great piece though.