|Reviews for Pretty Boy|
| JiMbO XXI chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
iv read a littel of your pomes and stuff it sounds like your always waiting go out and tell him! dude
| MagicWords chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
"Your beautiful"-"You're beautiful"
"The loved you first"-"TheY loved you first"
just a few mistakes that stopped me in my tracks while reading. another great piece though.