| Reviews for The Conglomeration of Bad Haikus |
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   Amaury chapter 10 . 6/14/2009 Very clever and amusing. I like your talent. |
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 10 . 4/26/2009 Reviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathon! *link on profile* I love the cheerful voice of this poem because it makes me ready for adventure! I didn't like the lack of imagery here though. It would've made the poem better. |
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 9 . 4/26/2009 Reviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathon! *link on profile* I like the foreboding mood here. It makes for great suspense. I also like the message because it's a very true one. |
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 8 . 4/26/2009 Reviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathon! *link on profile* I liked the original idea here because I would've never thought of something so obvious! I also like how you wrote a poem making fun of chat speak because it's every writer's bane. |
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 7 . 4/26/2009 Reviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathon! *link on profile* I love this cool idea because it sticks it to the man. :P I also love the way this poem is organized; it's pretty funny. |
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 6 . 4/26/2009 Reviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathon! *link on profile* I love how you told us indirectly that you were allergic to cats without coming straight out and saying it. It was a pretty smart move. I also liked how you compared cats to pepper on your nose because that's a very original and interesting metaphor. |
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 5 . 4/26/2009 Reviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathon! *link on profile* Haha, I love this idea because it's something I can personally relate to. I hate that formula. I also liked that you were able to create such a fun haiku about math, of all things! Very clever of you. |
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 4 . 4/26/2009 Reviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathon! *link on profile* I love the voice of this poem because it reminds me of a little girl so much. I also like the idea for this story because it's cute and innocent. |
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 3 . 4/26/2009 Reviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathon! *link on profile* I like the idea of this poem because it's something everyone understands. I also admire the desperation in the narrator's voice because it seems so real. |
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 2 . 4/26/2009 Reviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathon! *link on profile* I like the humorous tone to this poem because it made me laugh. I didn't like the word choice in this poem though because I think it could've been more creative. |
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 4/26/2009 Reviewing for the Review Game's Review Marathon! *link on profile* Ha! I liked the twenty-first century theme here. Very quirky. I also liked the sneaky story in there. Very clever. |
| R. E. Ellison chapter 8 . 4/23/2009 Future generations will find logs of old texts and wonder what happened to reduce the human language to this. Were we conquered by math-based aliens or was it actually PLANNED? Clever and subversive at the same time. I have to admit I NEEDED the translation. |
| R. E. Ellison chapter 5 . 4/23/2009 Id didn't see you in back watching me in my math class. You MUST have been there. this is WAY too accurate. |
| R. E. Ellison chapter 1 . 4/23/2009 Just my cup of tea. |
| the shattered star chapter 10 . 4/23/2009 I love these! Quite humorous and... lyrical. Keep writing please! Bisous ~ the shattered star |