Reviews for Mechanical Water
dreamshell chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
This is very well-written and has a balanced rhythm, though I'm unsure how to take the context of the piece. If this is perhaps a description of the horrors of unrestrained "gray goo", than I find it interesting. If, however, this is an abstract condemnation of technological progress, specifically the idea of the machine interfacing with the human being, I'm significantly less happy since I sort of support that idea.

Anyway, strong writing at the very least.
Liastoria Alestera chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
WOW, it's really really nice, keep it up and your efforts WILL be recognised:) All the best!
Dekkis chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
This was awesome! Great word usage!