heyy1! this is gettin really exciting :P!

i really love both the guys but i feel the story is really stuffed of tiny tiny description making it too filled with information

this is definitely a must read. Katie's perspective is real honest, and the characters are so endearing. I can understand her situation (sort of), being in a class filled with the intellectuals of the batch and you feel like a total idiot who's bound to drop the class by the end of the week... but I didn't, and I hope Katie'd stay put too. XD We've got the future chapters to testify that, so I'll set aside my philosophies on.. uhm... trying to believe that I'm not that big of an idiot I think I am, and wish you the best. haha, this was one random review, but please know that I have a big chemistry lab report to work on and my words are most sincere in their own little, weird way...

yeah. :)

i was beginning to think that Aaron and Seth had no friends...

really good two chapters so far xD

wow. i really liked this chapter, i loved that we got to see a different side to Seth and that she feels so comfortable around him.

The place really does sound nice. I wish i could visit it :).

I'll read chap 5 tomorrow

and i'll be looking forward to it.

:)

x

omg omg omg you gotta continue, it's such a gudd story !

please it's really gudd :)

Well, actually, I've been kept busy by ArP classes and college applications as well, or else I would have read and reviewed sooner. (How are the apps coming along, though? I'm only applying to two places, and I still haven't finished them. Yikes!) But I am glad you found time enough to update. Moe than I can say about my own writing. :-) But, anyway...

Another wonderful update. (Three, in fact.) The situations are a little staged and cliched but written in a way that makes it mostly excusable. There's definitely a difference between poorly written cliches and well written cliches. I'm enjoying the characters, especially Seth. Aaron's a lovely fellow, but Seth is the real excitement. I'd go for Seth, but, hey, Kate can have her own preferences. :-) Keep up the good work!

This is a good story off to a definitely interesting start.

I'm bias. I'm born and raised New Jersey. South-Central, though, not North. I've never been to Hoboken. At least I don't think I have. I've always just skipped over it to New York. Just a tidbit of information: North and South Jersey are almost entirely different. Regardless, we do use the term "creeper" here. Very often, actually. And you got the speeding down the road thing right with Seth. Jersey drivers don't care. We all speed. If you can drive in Jersey, you can drive almost anywhere.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this is headed. Great start.

awh, this story is quite! definitely different from a lot of others who usuakky have an arrogant jerk lurking around somewhere, lol. can't wait for the next installment.

-JRG

Kate should like Seth, not Aaron. Aaron is nice, but Seth is a god. Seriously. Great chapter! :)

Good luck with your first day of insufferable school as you so aptly put it. :)

Awesome chapter. That little alcove place sounds gorgeous, and I can just imagine it in my mind. I'm glad Seth and kate became such good friends so fast...it would be awesome to have a guy friend like him.

Anyway, update soon, and keep up the amazing work! :)

You're from Wisconsin? How cool! And I was wondering about Chatty Belle...I mean, cause I had never heard of her before. Anyway, fantabulous chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and can't wait to see what happens next. I'm a little puzzled from Seth's outburst, but I guess we'll see, right? And Aaron is SUCH a sweetheart...and I loved where Seth took his hands off the wheel. That was hilarious. Anyway, awesome job!

"Inhale" her peaches? That was a great chapter, and your description just got better and better! Seth seems like a nice guy, and so does Aaron. Their banter is really funny. :)

I like this a lot so far. It's funny how no one really even noticed her in her English class...ha ha. The workload is crazy too, and I love it. Being a Jersey Girl,I totally get it. :)

Your writing style is really gripping, and you're making Kate really believable, so i am really looking forward to reading the rest!

Yay! Don't let lack of reviews bring you down! I will always be waiting for the next chapter of this, and if need be, I will review to remind you.

But yeah - wow. Great first four chapters. I can't wait for the next chapter. Really! You're writing is very easy to read, and I'm starting to like Kate even more each chapter. And, you're writing in 1st person P.O.V.! That is a definite plus (well, for me anyways) !

I'm starting to think that maybe Seth and Aaron aren't human...but then again, that might just be me imagining things. I'll just have to wait and find out though, won't I?