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![]() ![]() I can't log in to review, sorry. Anyways, I really liked the chapter and it was so cute! I can't decide who I like better; Seth or Aaron. Seth or Aaron, it goes back and forth. I want my school to be that way...No. I don't want school, so I guess I don't get my own Seath and Aaron.. -sighs- Please update soon! I feel your pain, school tomorrow for us as well. -Maggie |
![]() ![]() I can't log in to review, sorry. Anyways, I really liked the chapter and it was so cute! I can't decide who I like better; Seth or Aaron. Seth or Aaron, it goes back and forth. I want my school to be that way...No. I don't want school, so I guess I don't get my own Seath and Aaron.. -sighs- Please update soon! I feel your pain, school tomorrow for us as well. -Maggie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. I still love Seth's character; good development for him here. He and Kate seem to have grown close rather quickly. I like how he took her to his 'Eden'. He's such a great character. Anyway, can't wait for more, as usual. Good luck with your first days at school! I hope they go awesome for you! - Koki |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant work. Now, I'm not sure if Seth was just joking, but there are indeed cows in NJ. Anyway, I love his character. I like Aaron as well, but Seth is just much more charismatic and really attention-grabbing. I have a question, though. Will she ever make a female friend in NJ? So far she's befriend two guys/love interests. It seems like she needs a bit of female company (eventually). Anyway, I love it. I'm already a Kate/Seth shipper, haha. - Koki |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, love your story. First time I've reviewed ever. x] Anyway, keep up the good work. :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey :) okay, so i've fallen in love with your story! and Seth for that matter! he seems irresistable! i love the way you write and i can't wait for more! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! I really like this, and I love the contrast between Aaron and Seth. A giant cow? So cool! I have no idea what we have a giant statue of... probably a beaver...or a hockey stick... -rolls eyes- It was really cute, and I can't wait for more! -Maggie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I happened across this little piece, and I'm pleased by how well it's written! I love how the characters are introduced, especially Seth. He reminds me exactly of a kid I knew in my Pre-IB Govt. class. Continue writing! I look forward to the next chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. It strikes me as being very...you. Love the creeper bit and was wondering if the English teacher is modeled after Mr. Worachek? Nice work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, it's a nice story and I like the characters. I look forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh i really really like this. and i really want to know what happens, so keep up the good work, and i'll be waiting for an update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really funny. The whole thing is going great. On my scale of 10, I give you... 8/10. Here's a mistake: In her last sentence, it reads, "I had found my first friend in New Jersey." I don't thing that's right. He's a jerk, and even if she did like him, he would be her second friend, remember Aaron, in her AP English Class? But good work! You're good at describing things. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Creeper' is used all the way up in British Columbia, so don't worry! I think it's a universal term... :D I like it! It's a very interesting start to what could be a really great story. Keep writing, and update soon! -Maggie |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha, amusing XD waiting for next chap ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I use creeper all the time so you're fine. Once again, this was a another well written chapter. I'm glad that she didn't immediately drop her higher classes. I could relate to that since I would probably be feeling the same emotion at Kate right now. I like the developement of Seth. Nice chapter! |