Reviews for Exceptionally Average
Maggie Summers chapter 4 . 9/1/2008
I can't log in to review, sorry.

Anyways, I really liked the chapter and it was so cute! I can't decide who I like better; Seth or Aaron. Seth or Aaron, it goes back and forth.

I want my school to be that way...No. I don't want school, so I guess I don't get my own Seath and Aaron.. -sighs-

Please update soon! I feel your pain, school tomorrow for us as well.

-Maggie
Maggie Summers chapter 4 . 9/1/2008
I can't log in to review, sorry.

Anyways, I really liked the chapter and it was so cute! I can't decide who I like better; Seth or Aaron. Seth or Aaron, it goes back and forth.

I want my school to be that way...No. I don't want school, so I guess I don't get my own Seath and Aaron.. -sighs-

Please update soon! I feel your pain, school tomorrow for us as well.

-Maggie
Koki Enwai chapter 4 . 9/1/2008
Good chapter. I still love Seth's character; good development for him here. He and Kate seem to have grown close rather quickly. I like how he took her to his 'Eden'. He's such a great character.

Anyway, can't wait for more, as usual. Good luck with your first days at school! I hope they go awesome for you!

- Koki
Koki Enwai chapter 3 . 8/26/2008
Brilliant work. Now, I'm not sure if Seth was just joking, but there are indeed cows in NJ. Anyway, I love his character. I like Aaron as well, but Seth is just much more charismatic and really attention-grabbing.

I have a question, though. Will she ever make a female friend in NJ? So far she's befriend two guys/love interests. It seems like she needs a bit of female company (eventually).

Anyway, I love it. I'm already a Kate/Seth shipper, haha.

- Koki
PringleMe chapter 3 . 8/26/2008
Hey, love your story. First time I've reviewed ever. x] Anyway, keep up the good work. :]
Wallflower.x chapter 3 . 8/26/2008
Hey :)

okay, so i've fallen in love with your story!

and Seth for that matter!

he seems irresistable!

i love the way you write

and i can't wait for more!

:)
Maggie Summers chapter 3 . 8/25/2008
Cute! I really like this, and I love the contrast between Aaron and Seth. A giant cow? So cool! I have no idea what we have a giant statue of... probably a beaver...or a hockey stick...

-rolls eyes-

It was really cute, and I can't wait for more!

-Maggie
LittleIllusionist chapter 2 . 8/14/2008
I happened across this little piece, and I'm pleased by how well it's written! I love how the characters are introduced, especially Seth. He reminds me exactly of a kid I knew in my Pre-IB Govt. class.

Continue writing! I look forward to the next chapters!
Mrs. Robinson chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Love it. It strikes me as being very...you. Love the creeper bit and was wondering if the English teacher is modeled after Mr. Worachek?

Nice work.
ileum chapter 2 . 8/13/2008
Heh, it's a nice story and I like the characters.

I look forward to more.
Meghyn chapter 2 . 8/13/2008
Oh i really really like this. and i really want to know what happens, so keep up the good work, and i'll be waiting for an update!
06johansenad chapter 2 . 8/12/2008
Really funny. The whole thing is going great. On my scale of 10, I give you...

8/10.

Here's a mistake:

In her last sentence, it reads, "I had found my first friend in New Jersey."

I don't thing that's right. He's a jerk, and even if she did like him, he would be her second friend, remember Aaron, in her AP English Class?

But good work! You're good at describing things.
Maggie Summers chapter 2 . 8/11/2008
'Creeper' is used all the way up in British Columbia, so don't worry! I think it's a universal term... :D

I like it! It's a very interesting start to what could be a really great story.

Keep writing, and update soon!

-Maggie
BluePillow chapter 2 . 8/11/2008
haha, amusing XD waiting for next chap ;)
TuneOut chapter 2 . 8/10/2008
I use creeper all the time so you're fine.

Once again, this was a another well written chapter. I'm glad that she didn't immediately drop her higher classes. I could relate to that since I would probably be feeling the same emotion at Kate right now.

I like the developement of Seth.

Nice chapter!
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