Reviews for Two Parting Sonnets for my Love
PSYCNese chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
I beg of you please let me copy this and show it on my school folder this year! If you want your real name displayed I will gladly put it on there and if not I will use your ficpress name! please let me know whether or not its okey doke :)
Forever Forbidden chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Oh my. That was breathtakingly beautiful :o

It's the realization of knowing that a love fails...and the inevitable revultion that results. I'm in love with the old English feel of the piece, and the rhymes are subtle but work so well. Keep up the good job!

The only bit I was a bit confused about was "And feelings with a melancholy earned."

Anyways great work (:

Thanks for reviewing my old stuff! I'm sorry I hadn't been able to respond for the longest time.

-FF