Reviews for She's It
Lise Meitner chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Wow, this is very sad :(

But very beautifully written. I can feel the emotions in each line. The only thing I would fix is the word "easy" to "easily" in the line: "And you’re falling for her so easy." It just sounds better to me. I hope for your sake that this wasn't written from first hand experience, but regardless; this is a great poem. :)