| Reviews for Out of Luck |
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   Floppy125 chapter 16 . 11/19/2009 aw! what a nice chapter! You had a few grammar mistakes (with the tenses) but not more than than ;) it was a great chapter and I love how they're making progress! please update ASAP |
| iluvodie chapter 16 . 11/19/2009 stupid charlie :[ |
| sandcastlesinthesand chapter 16 . 11/19/2009 THAT WAS SO ADORABLE/AMAZING. I CAN'T STOP SMILING! |
| chng234 chapter 15 . 11/18/2009 i hope they will be together |
| iluvodie chapter 15 . 11/18/2009 :tears: I LUV AIDEN! can't wait to read more. keep up the good work! |
| Northwesst chapter 15 . 11/17/2009 haha the cripple! funny! update soon! |
| Floppy125 chapter 15 . 11/17/2009 yes! finally they talked! please update ASAP! The story's going great :) |
| Floppy125 chapter 14 . 11/17/2009 I DON'T WANT THEM TO BE FRIENDS! PLEASE DON'T LET AIDEN MOVE ON SO THEY CAN BE TOGETHER! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP AND PLEASE CHANGE THE STORY STATUS, BECAUSE IT SAYS THAT IT'S COMPLETE |
| chng234 chapter 14 . 11/16/2009 aiden is so sweet. |
| sandcastlesinthesand chapter 14 . 11/16/2009 AHH! I SQUEALED LIKE A GIRL! HAH! NO JOKE! love this moment! |
| AdoringFan chapter 13 . 11/16/2009 I love where this story has taken me so far, I absolutely look forward to more. I must also add, I ADORE this line Kate says to Charlie at the end of Chapter 11: “Could you get any more cliché?” Because I exactly agree with it! I was kinda hoping that Charlie wouldn't end up as a bad person, but Kate still leaves him because she realizes that she loves Aiden, despite her denials. I still think you've done a wonderful job with presenting this story (even though Charlie is cliché). I hope you post some more chapters soon! |
| Floppy125 chapter 13 . 11/15/2009 poor Kate! I love Aiden! he's so sweet and caring! please update ASAP! |
| sandcastlesinthesand chapter 13 . 11/15/2009 AH! AIDEN TO THE RESCUE! update soon :D |
| chng234 chapter 12 . 11/14/2009 charlie is a jerk |
| oxsarahxo chapter 12 . 11/14/2009 i love this! update soon :) |