|Reviews for Pleasure Island|
| Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Ah, you make me cry cos
you used the word "boulangerie" before
I could discover it myself.
I'm gonna get a hernia or somethin'
tryin' to top that.
How do you create these wondeful
magical spells? Your rhymes and
rhythms come to you so naturally;
anyway, that's the perfect illusion
you unfailingly create.
Prospero...Morgana Le Fay...
You fell enchantress!
Such is the power of words...
Jeeze. I wish I could buy you dinner...
| chemarim chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Thank you for reviewing my poem! I know I'm clunky. I'm always saying things in a way that does not work. )
I would give you some helpful criticism... but uh... I love your poetry the way it is. Which. Honestly? I don't think I've said before. So, yay! Get published so I can go and patron your works.
| Girl On A Strawberry Swing chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Amazing. There's too much imagery here for me to mention it all, but it paints a great picture. I love the last stanza here, especially, "And a man asks me" through "I've found religion already". Great lines.
| Katie Nicole chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
This is beautiful.
I love the way you break your lines, and your descriptions are just ... ah. I like it, very much.
Thank you for writing it [: