its been a few years but i'm rereading a story here and there. this was one of my favourites back then and still quite good now. do you know I never knew there was a sequel? i'll have to read that one next.

I really did enjoy this story, though the ending was kinda disappointing.
All the same it was a good read.
Thanks!

-Aja

love it!

I feel like you set this up perfectly for a sequel, or that Tammie almost deserves her own back story.

That may just be my opinion. Great job, I enjoyed your story.

why would she be falling in love with him after he calls her uninteresting and almost attacks her?

That was a great story! It started slowly and I wasn't really sure where you're going with it until May's change. Her character, very awkward at the beginning, developed a lot and there's still some room for more:) Aca's awesome and the other vampires are pretty interesting. I'm glad you've started a sequel because I'd like to know more about their world. I'd like to see Rochell, Katee and Craig again. Good luck with your writing!

This was the first story I ever read on FictionPress and it made me want to read so many more.

I loved this story to bits. Especially Aca and May's relationship.

Sorry I never left a review before now but I thought I had to leave one now.

This is a great story ! Well done :)

ps...so love Aca )

you get your 'then's and 'than's mixed up...in fact they're all 'than's. the key to be a good writer is good grammar...because smart people won't want to read thay (it can get annoying.)

but your story is actually good enough for me to ignore my pet peeve for now because usually it wouldnt last very long... fyi- good ebough is really good.

Why did it end? There's still so much they need to finish. I definitely think there should be a sequel; you left me with too many questions.

Awesome ending. I would love to see her sister come back when they go on the hunt for the vial. Nice job and I can't wait for the sequel

what? that cant be the end. they hav still got to go to the capital nd find out bout mays parents and stuff. im saying SEQUAL! the story needs ta b finishd

Awesome chapter. I'm seriously curious as to why her parents were marked but we shall see.

Salt water taffy. How awesome! Great chapter.

that was a ggod chap. very cute. kinda morbidly cute though. im lovin this story!

I think Aca needs anger management, and did Trevor die? It sounded as if May was ripping his throat...if May did she's like Aca with the whole killing thing. Can't wait for more!