Reviews for Tear Through The Skin
angel cloud chapter 17 . 12/15/2018
its been a few years but i'm rereading a story here and there. this was one of my favourites back then and still quite good now. do you know I never knew there was a sequel? i'll have to read that one next.
ajashire1 chapter 17 . 6/11/2015
I really did enjoy this story, though the ending was kinda disappointing.
All the same it was a good read.

angel cloud chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
love it!
L. Valdez chapter 17 . 9/19/2009
I feel like you set this up perfectly for a sequel, or that Tammie almost deserves her own back story.

That may just be my opinion. Great job, I enjoyed your story.
Meg Wren chapter 4 . 5/13/2009
why would she be falling in love with him after he calls her uninteresting and almost attacks her?
Amelya chapter 17 . 9/17/2008
That was a great story! It started slowly and I wasn't really sure where you're going with it until May's change. Her character, very awkward at the beginning, developed a lot and there's still some room for more:) Aca's awesome and the other vampires are pretty interesting. I'm glad you've started a sequel because I'd like to know more about their world. I'd like to see Rochell, Katee and Craig again. Good luck with your writing!
buzzgirl37 chapter 17 . 9/16/2008
This was the first story I ever read on FictionPress and it made me want to read so many more.

I loved this story to bits. Especially Aca and May's relationship.

Sorry I never left a review before now but I thought I had to leave one now.

This is a great story ! Well done :) love Aca )
smellgoody chapter 8 . 9/13/2008
you get your 'then's and 'than's mixed fact they're all 'than's. the key to be a good writer is good grammar...because smart people won't want to read thay (it can get annoying.)

but your story is actually good enough for me to ignore my pet peeve for now because usually it wouldnt last very long... fyi- good ebough is really good.
Aweso chapter 17 . 8/28/2008
Why did it end? There's still so much they need to finish. I definitely think there should be a sequel; you left me with too many questions.
AMM3485 chapter 17 . 8/28/2008
Awesome ending. I would love to see her sister come back when they go on the hunt for the vial. Nice job and I can't wait for the sequel
MySweetFears chapter 17 . 8/27/2008
what? that cant be the end. they hav still got to go to the capital nd find out bout mays parents and stuff. im saying SEQUAL! the story needs ta b finishd
AMM3485 chapter 16 . 8/27/2008
Awesome chapter. I'm seriously curious as to why her parents were marked but we shall see.
AMM3485 chapter 15 . 8/25/2008
Salt water taffy. How awesome! Great chapter.
MySweetFears chapter 15 . 8/23/2008
that was a ggod chap. very cute. kinda morbidly cute though. im lovin this story!
Aweso chapter 14 . 8/23/2008
I think Aca needs anger management, and did Trevor die? It sounded as if May was ripping his throat...if May did she's like Aca with the whole killing thing. Can't wait for more!
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