Reviews for Boy Bride
Guest chapter 9 . 10/29/2016
When will the next chapter be posted into this story?
Marie Starr chapter 9 . 9/25/2014
please update soon! I really like this story and would like to see it completed.
pINk aNd GreeN CandyStripE chapter 9 . 2/20/2014
I liiiiike it. Please update sooooon!
KashiRyuu chapter 9 . 6/26/2013
This is a very delightful tale and I'm glad I stumbled upon it. Myrddyn is by far my favorite character. I have no reason behind it, it's just their. Looking forward to the next chapter!
vcdwhite chapter 9 . 4/24/2013
This is good fiction... i'm excited to read more.. :) I hope you'll be able to find the inspiration and time to continue writing :)
DrarryFrerard chapter 9 . 1/24/2013
Keep writing dude!
sk84ndd327r0y chapter 9 . 7/26/2012
Hello! I just finished reading what has been done with this wonderful story so far and I hope you'll see this review.
I love this story! It is freaking awesome.
anydayanywhere chapter 9 . 4/29/2012
I really like this story! The plot and characters are just so interesting. I can't wait for more. :D
Katelaina chapter 9 . 1/12/2012
Please continue the story I so enjoy reading it.
mousegirl05 chapter 9 . 3/7/2011
Well here I am again finding myself at the end of a lovely, engaging story that I THOUGHT was completed, only to find the air in my sails evaporating leaving me all crestfallen. *sighs*

I do hope you have plans to continue this, if only because your wizard is so unabashedly fun that any story that he's in MUST find some sort of completion. I found the plot interesting, and the dark beginning really drew me in and made me want to keep reading to find out how this boy was going to live after this. And I kinda want to see ‘Boss’ with his face bashed in. That would be great.

One suggestion I would have for you would be to consider not pilfering names from Beowulf, if for no other reason than you are obviously talented enough to come up with complete novel characters that deserve greater service than to be accidentally (or intentionally) saddled with preconceived ideas others may approach them with based on previous readings (especially because you pointed out that you pulled them from Beowulf). Wow. How do you like THAT run-on? *laughs* Either way, I’m certain that you could fine Old English naming conventions if not Old English names themselves that would not make people go ‘Oh, I hated that guy, he was such a pansy’ or ‘Man, I remember him being an arrogant so-and-so’, because they may not come to the table with those notions about the characters you WANT them to come with—on the assumption you did it intentionally. For example, I hated Hrothgar, but one of my very close friends loved him. *shrugs* Okay, lecture finished. _

I’m going to hit that little subscribe button on the HOPE that you return soon to this story. I would love to see that gala, see further interactions with the Alpha’s old flame and his destined one, see the response of the council, and of course see the Alpha and our little foreigner falling in love for real. I must say that I absolutely loved the bit about the eggs and the wolves and most especially the sweet, sweet dream Jibriel had about/with his first love. That very nearly moved me to tears. Masterfully done.

Darkest-Dark-Lady chapter 9 . 2/27/2011
I love your story-not much more to say since you writing style is ,update soon,I can't wait to see what happens next!
unorthodox chapter 9 . 1/11/2011
Nice! the friendly banter, mabey they're getting along. But

i'm sure jibriel still means what he says, though. I have checked out and reviewed on silent song;pretty good. Slash fics make everything better. please update on this one and silent song, pretty please?
unorthodox chapter 8 . 1/11/2011
uh oh, go jibriel! Fight for your love! this story is awesome. Is jibriel going teach leonhart to dance? So cute!

Continue with the brilliance
unorthodox chapter 6 . 1/11/2011
hey, i knew it! Gabriel is the same thing, sort of. this part was the most wonderful. for someone so innocent, he is so wicked. I'm sure Leonhart would agree,heh,heh.

continue with the brilliance
UNORTHODOX chapter 5 . 1/11/2011
damn! I can say drama, too. jibriel. . . .awesome name. I'm something of an authoress meself, though I have no account. Can I borrow it? Also, can you shed more light on myrddin's past? I love this , I love 'em all!

Continue with the brilliance
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