|Reviews for Choke|
| ZombieMcQueen chapter 1 . 8/15/2008
this was excellent :)
the third paragraph seemed a bit less imaginitive than the others, but the final line was a kicker. overall, this whole poem was lovely, in a sort of dispairing way...kind of like a wilting rose or a tree losing its leaves in fall
if that makes sense
| Ainu chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
This was very well written and descriptive.
I love it and quite frankly, I can't believe no one's reviewed this.