Would it be at all possible for an extension of this? It's far too entertaining to stay a one-shot.

I like.

And you know if you're worried about the plagerism thing still, you could always try , you can't copy and paste on that site. And I hear that the top 5 authors for some amount of time get picked by the company that hosts the site to become an authentic book.

Your choice, of course.

' “I'm fourteen!” I said, eyes widening. “Let me out! Let me out of the car!” '

That was hilarious! Nice work :P

you should seriously consider making this into a longer story... it's very entertaining.. I swear i laughed so hard that stomach almost exploded! :P such a funyn story :D

Ahaha cute story!

This was hilarious. As well as the strawberry story. I can imagine that situation, too. You should make it a non-one shot. It would be cute!

I love it! It's a great story, nothing like what I've read before. Keep writing!

Ha ha, funny!

LMAO

I loved this story! It's soo good, I couldn't get enough rofl. I wish it had been longer, or maybe no a one-shot. Oh well.

I was in class, reading this and kept laughing... Loudly, might I add.I'm sure some people cast me weird glances, but I wouldn't know cos I never looked away from the screen. THough my one friend thought I was laughing at him. Oops. xD

Another great piece! (L):)

-xx

This was great

U need to do a continuation

X

Sascha is awesome! Haha...I especially love her reaction to her mom's sex talk, and just how oblivious she is in general.

Great one-shot!

- Rebekah

Omg that was so hilarious(sp?)

You have to give us a follow up!

more more more! excited bounces ensuing. That was so sweet and cute I want more of it I loved it lol

I know this is supposed to be a one shot, but I think it would be awesome if you wrote more chapters. I found it hilarious and cute!

Aha this was absolutely hilarious, I loved it.