LMAO

this story is hilarious n i almost died

it was a superb one-shot but it doesn't really have that ending feeling so maybe u can tweak it or something

anyways plz update on your other stories soon:)

its really good...you should add another oneshot or something .. to give it the ending feel...cause this one makes it seem like more is yet to come

I really liked that! It made me laugh so hard sometimes, like the, "I'm FOURTEEN! Let me out! Let me out of the car!"

Great job. D

Against the advice of the many who are screaming for you to continue, I think this works very well as a one-shot. It could be continued, sure, but it also stands strongly on its own.

And is hilarious. So very hilarious.

I really like this story. Even though it's labeled a one shot, it doesn't really have a definite ending. Like the others that have reviewed, I also think that you should turn this into a story. Please update soon and keep up the great work.

LOL.

That was hilarious.

"Or is he the incarnate of Chewbacca?" LOL I laughed forever at that.

This could totally turn into a story... ;-)

I like this story so far. It's very interesting and I'm going to be a Freshman in the fall so it gives me some tips. Like be careful to make sure that you don't walk into the boys locker room. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter so please updates soon!

That was . . . interesting, but I wouldn't really put it under romance. The most she ever feels for him seems to be mild revulsion. I think this could have been a lot better (and more romance-y) if she had been a little older and reacted a little more maturely at being kissed.

OMGOMGOMGOMG, i haven't reviewed your stories in the LONGEST time, but maybe that's because all you ever updated was horrorscape *glares* anywho, I was especially intrigued with your story, it drew me in, as if I was actually there. Boy, how I would just LOVE to actually be there. In the boys locker room, I mean. But, funny story, i actually HAVE seen the inside of our boys' locker room, it smelled terrible :p, however, I wasn't on some kind of joy ride, hoping to cop a look a guys' SPECIAL parts, as kinky as that sounds...But i was collecting the lost and found bins from both the girls' and boys' locker room.

Although, between you and me, I would just LOVE to take her place in that situation. I've never seen a guy naked before, and we are the same age, she and I. That lucky girl...*sighs* however, a GUY has been in the girls locker room before...while me and my friends were changing. It was very awkward. Apparently our teacher didn't know that we were still in there. hehehehehe...we gave him a whole bunch of crap about it just like matt did.

ah, that matt, "stop acting like I'm trying to rape you" hehehehehehehehe, that was my favorite part in the story. She should be happy that he was kissing her at all, lol. BTW how did the spit get on her neck? Was he, like, taking planning to give her a hickey or somethin'?

I think that you should make a sequel to this oneshot, or add more chapters if you can, i would totally review it in a nano second MUHAHAHAHA. *smexes matt* *pulls him out of story*

anywho, I think i should bring my rambles to an end, see ya!

-mole-san

What? How could you make this a one-shot? You must expand it! How else am I supposed to know what happens next? And I love Sascha! She's a super geek with accidental attitude. Haha. Write more please! If you don't that's fine, cause it's ace anyway.

Ooh! I like the freshmen and senior line. The whole naked thing? Hilarious. Haha. Well done.

I THINK U SHUD CONTINUE THIS ONTO A WHOLE STORY! GOOD JOB

CANDANY BABY/MRS. DRAMA LOVER

that was great! you should consider having it not be a one shot. i think that you could have a few chapters in it if you really wanted to. but then again its up to you but it would definatly be a posibility.:)

u should let the story go on .. i certainly enjoyed it..so far..

oh my god that made me laugh so much! good job!