Though it's a rarity in fiction, I actually like the way you're portraying twins. Normally, twins in books are practically one character in two bodies (Fred and George Weasley, for example), but here the twins are actually different, though related of course, people. It's refreshing.
One of my brothers, who is a twin, and I, who am not, talk about this to each other all the time, bemoaning the misrepresentation if twins I literature. Even in books I love, if there are any twins they are almost always done wrong. This story is a breath of fresh air in that respect.

Sequel?

There's multiple choices on this story? o.O?

i think the multiple choice options from quizilla are still in the text. they should probably be removed to avoid confusion.

Uhh... I don't know what to say it was an ok story...

loved the story! hated the ending though.. it was so.. i dunno, it just didn't do the story justice

is there going to be more, i think you could keep going, this is awesome. i know there could be more that happens between them. great job and keep going.

this is so awesome

A why oh why do all good stories end so soon? Anyone can please explain that to me in plain English, German or Estonian? Cause the funniest and greatest ones seem to be shortening in correlance with the amount of laughs they coax out of me... This one's a perfect example,

Oh this is good - it's 3AM and I can't go to sleep because I'm laughing myself into shreds... Thank you for such good entertainment!

I have to say that this was so darn funny. I was laughing out loud:)

it ended a little abruptly, but i like it... it was a nice, original story, :)

:D CLASSIC ENDING. *laughs hysterically*

haha liked thos story too! it was good

really funny

their parents are asses!

getting rid of them and then adopting donny!

and donny being gay! haha

all good!

Fun. Entertaining. love it!

Especially Sephen's Mini-me (lol)