|Reviews for Who is Hiding?|
| effervescent-sentiments chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
I really enjoyed the subtle rhyming in this; it means that none of the rhymes felt forced.
Although, I didn't like that none of the rhymes are very interesting. Try not choosing the first rhyme that pops into your head, and remember that rhyming dictionaries are your friend. :) It's not cheating if you use them, just as it isn't when you use a thesaurus.
The first stanza is my favorite. It's so simple and beautiful. Keep in mind my advice, and keep writing!
| Forfeit The Game chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
Hey I like how the bolded words can either go with the poem or can fit together by themselves. I thought that was really inventive, even if thats not what you intended.
| TheBeautyOfTheGrave chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Wow, I love the way this is set out, very original and interesting. I just love the whole concept of the poem too, the idea is good. Nice work, keep it up.
God Bless You
| Guardian Soul chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Wow...Very deep poem. I love the parts in bold, they're separated from the poem and at the same time fit so well. Really great job!