Reviews for Whispers in the Dark
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
very suspenseful. great ending
MissAvariss chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
I didn't like these phrases:

"...as dark as a funeral..." the "dark" usually refers to a mood when in tandem with a funeral, and I never thought it would make a good shade. xD.

"...my parents’ (who were a king and queen) death..." the () make it a little jarring. Just a bit. Perhaps more like "...the death of my parents, who were the king and queen..."

Your descriptions, otherwise, I liked.

The whole story sounded a little cliched, until the ending, which was nice and refreshing, even though I felt the last line was a bit cliched (even though it fit. And it was just a line. xD.).

Good job!

- Octavia