Reviews for summer kisses
MagicalThinking chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
aww this is absolutely the sweetest thing; it made me smile lol... Lovely wording, and the shortness just adds onto it
Ashelin chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
It was sweet, and I liked the imagery and the animation you gave the wind. Though I have to wonder, in the eighth line did you mean to say, "your lips PART, as if to say," or something along those lines, because it's a bit confusing because the lips aren't doing anything at all. Nonetheless, good job.